Daughter of Life
Daughter of Life
Broke a piece from a Dream
Where,Why,How
The news reached the ears of the sky
Big wings heard the news
Long beaks heard it
Black tongues heard it
Sharp claws heard it
The piece was naked
Fragrance itself wore torn clothes
Neither heart nor body
Had any shelter to provide
My piece was snatched from me
Both my hands were wounded
My cheeks were scratched
Lips were bleeding
My piece was gone
only the thought remained
The night of the sky
Like raven started to fly.
By Dr. Ritu Dewan
Comments (12)
Really heart touching
The expression is exceptionally beautiful.marvellous use of imagery.
Loved it
Heart touching thoughts and imagination woven into words.
Beautiful!!
Wonderful thought
Wonderful composition
Imagination expressed beautifully in a perfect manner
Wonderful poem.
A very beautiful expression of thoughts and emotions with perfectly embellished with personification, visual & kinaesthetic imagery.
Beautiful expression of thoughts
A very beautiful expression of thoughts and emotions perfectly embellished with personification, visual & kinaesthetic imagery.
Each word of the verse touched the heart to the core and left each nerve of mine numb.So beautifully expressed.
Exquisite expression of intense thoughts about life.