Daughter of Life

Daughter of Life

Daughter of Life
Broke a piece from a Dream
Where,Why,How
The news reached the ears of the sky

Big wings heard the news
Long beaks heard it
Black tongues heard it
Sharp claws heard it

The piece was naked
Fragrance itself wore torn clothes 
Neither heart nor body
Had any shelter to provide

My piece was snatched from me
Both my hands were wounded
My cheeks were scratched
Lips were bleeding

My piece was gone
only the thought remained
The night of the sky
Like raven started to fly.

By Dr. Ritu Dewan

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Comments (12)

  • Sharad Gupta Reply

    Really heart touching

    February 2, 2023 at 12:25 pm
  • Anju Bala Reply

    The expression is exceptionally beautiful.marvellous use of imagery.
    Loved it

    February 2, 2023 at 1:04 pm
  • Chetna Agarwal Reply

    Heart touching thoughts and imagination woven into words.
    Beautiful!!

    February 2, 2023 at 3:46 pm
    • Gaurav chaudhary Reply

      Wonderful thought

      February 2, 2023 at 5:43 pm
  • Priyanka Singh Reply

    Wonderful composition

    February 2, 2023 at 5:58 pm
  • Sangeeta Parmar Reply

    Imagination expressed beautifully in a perfect manner

    February 2, 2023 at 6:03 pm
  • Chitra Tyagi Reply

    Wonderful poem.

    February 3, 2023 at 2:31 am
  • Geeta Arora Reply

    A very beautiful expression of thoughts and emotions with perfectly embellished with personification, visual & kinaesthetic imagery.

    February 3, 2023 at 5:29 am
    • Abhiruchi rawat Reply

      Beautiful expression of thoughts

      February 3, 2023 at 7:31 am
  • Geeta Arora Reply

    A very beautiful expression of thoughts and emotions perfectly embellished with personification, visual & kinaesthetic imagery.

    February 3, 2023 at 5:30 am
  • Vinod Batra Reply

    Each word of the verse touched the heart to the core and left each nerve of mine numb.So beautifully expressed.

    February 3, 2023 at 5:35 am
  • Praveer Kumar Reply

    Exquisite expression of intense thoughts about life.

    February 3, 2023 at 5:54 am

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